hey this is my very first poem i wrote for some one in the diary . now i read back i feel it was childish , but yet i am very proud of it .
feel free to give comment.
title: 电话
其实其实
思绪根本也无意
只是手臂
暗地里潜意识地协调着
电话上的号码
嘟嘟
请问那把熟悉的的录讯
为何为何
总摆出一副冷漠的无情
我脆弱的心
总在话筒另一端期盼着
她
轻柔的声音
posted by thong @ 6:21 AM
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1 Comments:
Why you think, you are childish?? I say, it is perfect, why? because this simple poem reflect your true feeling at the time. I have the same moment before at when I was at your age so I understand you just write what is fit for you at the time becasue there was the only way you express yourself!!!!
LY.Tai
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